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 Post subject: He ain't heavy...
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 10:14 pm 
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Thanks for the new SLOP, Mules.

More is bound to follow. But for now: thank you.

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 Post subject: Re: He ain't heavy...
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 10:42 pm 
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Well good thing Tony Ray was carrying Cohen. I don't think they'd get very far if Cohen had to carry Tony.

Speaking of which, I can see where Tony Ray's going with this story.

Tony Ray beats the crap out of an asshole for mouthing off and gets saddled with him (JJ) as a result.

Their Captain dies a completely pointless death.

JJ mouths off again. This time about "Golden BB's" and gets raped as a result.

They're taking Cohen to another base and get shot down.

They get captured as a result of arguing over leaving JJ behind.

Simon may or may not have gotten his nuts removed.

Cohen takes a bullet and drops dead in Tony Ray's arms.

I'm beginning to see a pattern here. "Life ain't fair" (Also alluded to previously as to why said pig is in the army to begin with.)

There's more to this story, but I can't see any good on the horizon for Tony Ray.

The only question I have is does Tony Ray end up telling Rita the rest of the story? And if so, how does she react and what does he do in response?

And what of our shadow up in the tree?

I guess that was three questions.

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This is an absolutely fantastic page, my friend... Simply wonderful... An excellent rendering, just as it is an excellent emotional window,...in so many ways...

I want to personally thank you for not only attempting this when so many things are "at odds" for you (the biggest understatement of the year), but for being willing to wrap up so much of yourself into this as part of the package... This perfectly portrays the fact that there are crucial moments when the paths of art and life cross one another...

Thank you for sharing this excellent work at that crossroads...

Jadúgara ^_^

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This is just plain heartbreaking. I don't think I can say anything intelligent about it except it's crazy powerful.


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This is an incredibly moving page. It is all the more powerful for me when I think of the real emotion that must have gone into it. Thank you, Mulefoot.


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