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Author:  Nazgul777 [ Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:21 am ]
Post subject:  A Light in the Dark

Ok here's a fanfic I wrote after reading slop, enjoy :wink:
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Shlomp,shlomp,shlomp

Shail listened to sounds of her boots hitting the wet pavement. The vepr reached a thick hand into her leather pocket, grabbing a pack of smokes. Flicking open her lighter, she perched the ciggarette on her lips and pulled a long drag. Pocketing the pack, she looked to the sky, at the crushing frame of the skyscrapers boxing in the faint stars.

“ Why do I stay here?â€

Author:  Mulefoot [ Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:45 am ]
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Well it certainly has the feel of the SLOP universe. Dark, gritty, seedy... good things. It feels like the beginning of a story rather than just a story. I'm glad you wrote it.

You have a few problems here and there but I like it. Extra points for using Fitch and Coronado. I really need to update the Slopedia.

Author:  Nazgul777 [ Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:25 pm ]
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thanks, I'm glad you liked it

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